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English 002
Use a comma and a coordinate conjunction
1.I found it interesting how a child like me could
create such a creative acrostic but our teachers would have trouble finding a
method to help us easily remember our cardinal points.
Edited Run-On: I found it interesting how a child like me could
create such a creative acrostic, but our teachers would have trouble finding a
method to help us easily remember our cardinal points.
Use a semi-colon to connect two sentences
2. The globe helped us learn where these
countries were located the acrostic helped kids remember their directions.
Edited Run-On: The globe helped us learn where these countries were located; the acrostic helped kids remember their directions.
Good job, both are much better.
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