Thursday, February 27, 2014

Edited Run-ons

George Hernandez
2/26/14
English 002



Use a comma and a coordinate conjunction

1.I found it interesting how a child like me could create such a creative acrostic but our teachers would have trouble finding a method to help us easily remember our cardinal points. 
Edited Run-On: I found it interesting how a child like me could create such a creative acrostic, but our teachers would have trouble finding a method to help us easily remember our cardinal points.

Use a semi-colon to connect two sentences

2. The globe helped us learn where these countries were located the acrostic helped kids remember their directions. 

Edited Run-On: The globe helped us learn where these countries were located; the acrostic helped kids remember their directions. 

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