Thursday, February 27, 2014

Edited Run-ons

George Hernandez
2/26/14
English 002



Use a comma and a coordinate conjunction

1.I found it interesting how a child like me could create such a creative acrostic but our teachers would have trouble finding a method to help us easily remember our cardinal points. 
Edited Run-On: I found it interesting how a child like me could create such a creative acrostic, but our teachers would have trouble finding a method to help us easily remember our cardinal points.

Use a semi-colon to connect two sentences

2. The globe helped us learn where these countries were located the acrostic helped kids remember their directions. 

Edited Run-On: The globe helped us learn where these countries were located; the acrostic helped kids remember their directions. 

Wednesday, February 19, 2014

Rewriting Sentences



George Hernandez
February 18th, 2014

English 002




                                                               Rewriting Sentences 



Before a coordinating conjunction joining two sentences:
- Continuing on from trying to learn about the first two World Wars and the events of slavery, our teacher would use a globe to physically use and a map projected at the screen to visually analyze. 

Introductory phrase:
Teaching a child about directions isn't the easiest thing someone can do

Use with coordinate adjectives:
- My teacher described Never Ever Smoke Weed as an easy, memorable acrostic for children.

Adjective clause:
 So long as the device is simple, it’ll not only become easier to understand, but easier to remember as well.

Appositive:
- My middle school teacher, who teaches Geography, uses the acrostic Never Ever Smoke Weed to help her students better memorize their directions.

Parenthetical Expression:
- Never Ever Smoke Weed, as my teacher noticed, works to help children better memorize their cardinal directions while still being self aware about drugs such as weed.  

Absolute phrase:
 Sharing the acrostic Never Ever Smoke Weed was helpful to the class, it's simplicity is what makes it easier for kids to remember the device.

Words expressing contrast:
- Unlike other devices, Never Ever Smoke Weed is purposely made short to make it simple for everyone. 

To set of a quotation or a direct address:
“Share your knowledge. It is a way to achieve immortality.” says famous Buddhist monk, Dalai Lama XIV, in his novel "The Compassionate Life"

Tuesday, February 11, 2014

Michael's EN002 Blog

George Hernandez
February 7th, 2014
English 002

                                                  

                                                         Learning Cardinal Directions
                                              


 Teaching children about directions isn't the easiest thing someone can do. This is because children tend to have problems remembering which way certain directions are supposed to go. I know this because I suffered through the same issue as a kid. Growing up, I had trouble remembering where my left and right was and when my elementary school teacher would talk about where certain countries where with North or West, I would have trouble remembering where each was exactly. Since I had trouble distinguishing where north and south were, me and my friend, Ernesto, came up with the acrostic Never Ever Smoke Weed.

At the time, we've always heard the terms North, East, West, and South, but having to remember where they were was challenging for a child like me who was at elementary school at the time. It felt as if schools (such as mine) didn't put much effort in finding a way to show children what directions go where. Instead, it felt as if they chose not teach a method since that’s not the lesson being taught in class. Though, it could have been that teaching this was a challenge for them to find an easy method of teaching children cardinal directions. This is just speculation, however. I can’t determine why our teacher would avoid teaching us an easier method to understanding

As i grew up, I’ve noticed how my friends and classmates would struggle on differentiating between West to South or even North to East. Originally, I thought this was only an issue between a select few, but it felt as if it was common for kids my age to find it difficult to remember where each direction went. There was a time during my middle school days where my geography teacher would talk about the events of both World Wars and tried to use a globe to help us locate certain countries. Using a globe to help us learn where these countries were located was helpful, but I felt like there were still others who were having trouble remembering where exactly each country was located.  So to help out my classmates, I raised my hand and suggested my teacher to use the acrostic Never Ever Smoke Weed to the rest of the class. To my surprise, it helped the class out a lot more.
After class, my teacher spoke to me about how effective Never Ever Smoke Weed was in the class and was curious to know how I came up with such a simple device. I told her how the device was made in elementary school when my teacher would talk about history in where she would bring up the events of slavery and point to us different countries and states involved, but would always use cardinal directions to show us where each country involved was located. However, she didn’t teach us a method of remembering where each location was, so that’s where the acrostic was born. Surprised, my history teacher was wondering why she never thought of such a simple device. It was then I told her that the device could be used for her other classes as well. So long as the device is simple, it’ll not only become easier to understand, but easier to remember as well.


Even if you're already aware of the concept of Never Ever Smoke Weed, then creating acronyms like this benefits those who have trouble remembering or even understanding its device. The acrostic allows for you to understand how you can understand your cardinal directions, but it can also help you create your own device to help others understand various ideas. When Ernesto and I came up with Never Ever Smoke Weed, we created this to help us better understand something we couldn't properly remember, in this case the cardinal directions. If two children can create something as humorous and helpful as learning the difference between North, East, South, and West, then imagine the possibilities you can create.